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From: kaiton@banet.net Save Address Block Sender
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To: Jayson Deare <eva_unit_12@hotmail.com>
Subject: Pre-Reading draft
Date: Sat, 15 May 1999 19:36:11 +0100

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Heres the corrected draft, I may have missed a few slight ones but it
should tske care of the spelling mistakes.
If this copy does not work E-mail me and I'll send another.
Kaiton@banet.net

What The Hell Happened to Neon Genesis Evangelion
Episode 4
Eva's To your Marks/What The Fuck!!!!!!!!!
Hey Everyone I hoped you enjoyed episode 3. The direction that What The hell is
going in has finally been decided the series will run 10 episodes. So that means
that there are 6 episodes to go. Some of you may be asking what is the point of
this fic. Well it will all become clear sooner than you think. Thanks for
everyone who gave me fed back. Remember if you have friends who like fanfiction
but don't like lemons have them check out the non-Lemon Version of this fic.
Remember everything will be on my homepage first unless I put it up on Sunday so
check it out http://www.geocities/Tokyo/Subway/9523/fanfics.html. Well enough of
my blubbering. The usual disclaimers apply The story is mine the characters
aren't mine. All Neon Genesis Evangelion Characters are copyrighted by Gainax
and anyone else who owns rights to them. Characters from EvaLess used with
permission from Kaoru Nagisa. Please read his fic at Tabris enterprises on
geocities and on SDAT. I would also like to thank Eva!
_Pilott00 for prereading the last episode and by the time this one is out he
will have preread it to. I still need prereaders people. But know on to the
story
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Episode 3
Eva's to your marks/What The Fuck!!!!!!

Kaoru woke up and he was still in the bathroom. He wondered what time it was. He
looked at hi watch and saw that it was the next morning.

Kaoru: What The Fucccccckkkkkkk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He couldn't believe that he had slept that long. Great he had to get to school.
Wait it's Sunday the is no school on Sunday. Then he remembered thanks to some
boneheaded American exchange student they had school because he had made a bomb
threat.

Kaoru: Because of that kid I'm going to get in trouble.

Kaoru decide that he had better get his ass in gear if he didn't want his
parents to kill him. Kaoru got up and opened the door of the stall to his
amazement he was no in the same place he was yesterday. Then he saw a sign that
said welcome to the New Yokosuka mall.

Kaoru: Holly Shit how the hell did I get to new Yokosuka. He looked a the
bathroom he had just left and realized it was one of those new public bathrooms
that were capable of rented my places like malls for short periods of time. Then
when the lease is up the bathroom moves to a new place.

Kaoru: Ah Hell!!! Now how am I going to get home.
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(Caption)
Ikari Residence

Asuka walks into Shinji's room like she does every morning they have school.
instead of waking up the usual way she did she bent over and gave him a kiss on
the mouth. She could not believe how much she loved him it was amazing. She
thought of how much time they had lost because neither was willing to admit it
to each other. This started to wake Shinji up so instinctively he kissed her
back. Their kissed lasted 1 minute but it seemed to last longer for both of
them. Shinji had never opened his eyes during the kiss but he knew it was Asuka.
He decided it was time to get her back for slapping him last night.

Shinji: Thanks for the wake up kiss Rei.

Asuka went ballistic. If she had access to any firearms Shinji would be dead.

Asuka: How dare you kiss Wondergirl, I thought you guys had broken up!!!! and
that you were going out with me

Then with tears in her eyes.

Asuka: After all we have recently gone through Shinji how could you play with my
heart like that. Go back to your mindless doll if you want.

Asuka was really hurt she loved Shinji more than word could possibly say and now
she had lost him just after getting him. Asuka also began to wonder were she had
gotten those names for Rei from. She didn't care she hated Wondergirl and hated
Shinji. She started to leave his room

Shinji: Sprang up out of bed and yelled: Asuka wait I was just kidding, I knew
it was you the whole time. I was just getting you back for slapping me
yesterday. I'm sorry if I hurt you a scared

Asuka stops dead in her tracks.

Asuka: You were just kidding?

Shinji: Yes I was Asuka.

He doesn't wait for her to answer he takes her up in his arms and kissed her
hard on the mouth. He slips his tongue into her mouth and starts to probe her
mouth. Asuka melts as she feels Shinji's arms wrap around her. she starts to
kiss him back deeply and passionately. They start to move their way to Shinji's
bed. When Shinji stops grabs Asuka's arm and drags her out of his room.

Asuka: Shinji why are we stopping I want you so bad right now

Shinji: Asuka umm we kinda have to go to school now.

Asuka: Oh yeah, well let's get going then dumpkoff.

The 2 of them dash out of the door each of them regretting that they had school
today. Stupid American exchange student.
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(Caption)
Tokyo-3 7th junior and senior high

Asuka and Shinji coming running in moments before the bell rings. They take
their seats and sit down. There teacher Misato is already in class and you can
see all of the guys wondering if she's going to show them a flash of her
panties. Misato who is standing then quickly sits down and flashes the entire
class her panties. All of the boys were psyched to see that sight except for 3
the 3 who had once been here most devoted worshipers Kensuke, Touji and Shinji
had paid no attention to Misato's panty flash. She realized this and started to
wonder why, then she realized it
was time for her to start to teach class. boy did she not want to teach it was
Sunday and she had spent all Saturday fucking her boyfriend Kaji and getting
drunk she was way to tired.

Misato: Since none of us want to be here today you guys can do whatever you want
today except go home. I'm going to take a nap.

Misato put her head down on her desk and fell asleep.

Yoko was sitting in her seat she saw that all of her friends were here today.
Hikari and Touji were sitting together talking about something. Kensuke and
Akane were arguing about why Kensuke had run way when he was supposed to take
her shopping. Shinji and Asuka were sitting together and Asuka was resting her
head on his shoulder. Rei, well Rei was by herself. But shouldn't Rei be with
Kaoru or something like that. Yoko looked all over the entire room and didn't
see Kaoru anywhere she decided to go talk to her friends to see if they knew
were Kaoru was. She was doing this because Rei didn't look too happy. Yoko asked
all of her friends even Rei who answered.

Rei: I have no fucking clue were that stupid idiot is.

Yoko started to wonder just where Kaoru was.
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(Caption)
Highway 159 to Tokyo-3

Kaoru jumps in the truck that pulled over to pick him up. He was surprised that
he got picked up he thought that hitchhiking was a thing of the 20th century. He
heard some strange sounding music in the background but paid it no attention

Kaoru: Thanks for picking me up.

Man: No problem sonny where are you going

Kaoru: I'm heading for Tokyo-3

Man: Tokyo-3 that there them new fangeled city with all of them gadgets and
stuff?

Kaoru confused: I guess you could say that

Man: Well sunny I was heading back out to me farm which is 1hr away from that
new fangeled city of yours. I'll just take you as far as 'm going.

Kaoru: Thanks a lot you don't know how much this helps me.

Man: No problem there sunny. Let's get a movin there shall we. Yea Ha!

The man cranks up his stereo and it' splaying an ancient song, Kaoru doesn't
recognize the type but then he does, it, it, its country music. He's riding in
the car for 8 hours with a hick oh dear god how is he going to make it eight
hours listening to this crappie music. He's speech was so annoying but he was
going to have to deal with it if he wanted to make it home to his friends and
the girl of his dreams Rei. She owes me big time for this thought Kaoru as the
truck cruised down the interstate country music blaring. 8hrs, 8hrs left of
torture.
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(Caption)
Ayanami residence

Rei had gone home right after school. Since it had started to pour with rain
outside. Shinji and everyone had all gone straight to their own houses none of
them wanted to be out in this awful weather.

Rei sat in her room thinking: Where is Kaoru? I haven't seen him since he
refused to go shopping with me? Is he trying to get away from me does he not
like me anymore? What's wrong with me? Is it my looks? was it bad that night? I
don't know anymore does he hate me or does he like me? If only he would call me
then I would know how he really feels.

Just as Rei thought that thought the phone rang she rushed over to pick it up.

Rei: Hello who is this?

Kaoru: Rei it's me Kaoru. I'm so glad your home, I've been trying to get back to
you all day. I've missed you lots. I would have called you sooner but you were
in school.

Rei's heart soared and she heard those words the question that had been running
thought her mind were finally answered well some of them were she still had some
questions. She noticed that she could hear rain in the background.

Rei: Kaoru where are you and why didn't you come to school today?

Kaoru: I'm at the gas station Hinishama off of exit nine on highway 159. I'll
tell you why I wasn't' tin school later it's a long story. Look I'm running out
of time I borrowed money to make this phone call and I don't have any left. I
need you to do me a favor ok?

Rei: Sure anything.

Kaoru: I need you to come pick me up Rei. I would try to get my parents to but
they would not they would say to and make your own way home. I would try to
start hitchhiking but after the experience I just had I never want to do that
again.

Rei: Kaoru I don't now if I can I'll try though.

Kaoru: Thanks a lot Rei I love you.

Then suddenly the line goes dead. Rei hears to continue this call please insert
50000 yen. Rei hangs up the phone and begins to ponder how she's going to get
Kaoru home. Then it hits her she remembered that her parents Maya and Shigeru
were out of town until Monday since they were both lawyers that worked for the
same firm therefore they worked together all the time.

(Author's note If you're wondering yes that is Shigeru and Maya from the T.V
series. well now back to the fic)

Rei now knew exactly how she could pick up Kaoru her parents had left the second
car behind. Now she was really glad that her dad had taught her the basics of
driving and how to drive in bad weather when they used to live in Tokyo-2. She
was also glad he had explained to her how to drive in the rain. Well it looked
like she was going to have to put into practice the little things she had
learned about driving and piece together the rest. She is after all only 14. Rei
grabbed the key to the second car, which is a really nice German imported Audi
with a CD player. Rei popped in her favorite CD by Japanese pop artist Yoko
Takahashi. She also really likes this CD because it had a Japanese version of
Cruel Angel's Thesis on it. She put the car in gear she had a little trouble
getting out of the parking spot. When she did get out she put the car in drive
and went to get Kaoru.
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(Caption)

Hinishama gas station

Kaoru sat outside in front of the gas station getting as much protection for the
rain as he could. He had been waiting for Rei for a little over an hour now. To
be exact s 1hr and 15 minutes. He was starting to wonder if she would ever get
here. He waited for another 15 minutes. Kaoru started to think that Rei couldn't
come through for him when a car pulled up at the gas station.

Kaoru to the car: Rei is that you?

Rei: Yes it is hope in the passenger side.
Kaoru does what he is told and gets in the passenger side to his surprise Rei is
in the front seat of the drivers seat.

Kaoru ecstatically: Rei you drove out here to get me. I can't believe you did
that you know if you had gotten caught you would be in so much trouble!.

Rei: I know I know that's why it took me so long to get here. I had to figure
some stuff out, now let's hope the cops don't catch us on the way home.
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(Ayanami Residence)

Kaoru and Rei arrive back at her place an hour and half later. Rei had been
driving extra slow and carefully so as not to get picked up by he cops amazingly
she had not been toped at all. Kaoru had come back to her place because he did
not want to face his parents now and he wanted to spend time with Rei.

Kaoru: Rei thanks a lot for helping me out I don't now how I'm gonna repay you.
So have any ideas?

Rei: I know, hoe about you take me shopping this weekend.

Kaoru groans: Ok, I'll take you shopping it's the least I can do. And I promise
I won't run away this time.

Rei seductively: Good, but your going to have to do more than that to make
everything up to me.

Kaoru grinning slyly: Oh yeah and what's that. Rei pounces on him. they land on
her bed with Rei on all fours above Kaoru. She leans down and kisses him. They
stay kissing fro about 5 minutes then Rei brakes the embrace and sits up with a
somber look on her face

Kaoru confused: What's wrong Rei?

Rei: Kaoru I just need to know how you really feel about me. I love you with all
of my heart. I need you to be me. I no longer know how to be me without you.

Kaoru: Rei, I wasn't sure at first but now I know I feel exactly the way that
you do.

Rei is beaming she leans down and give Kaoru a kiss. Which he eagerly returns.
Then he starts to remove Rei's shirt. She then starts to remove his shirt and
pants. The 2 of them prepare to celebrate their love like they did 2 nights ago.

(Author's note Jeez was that WAFF or what well. I just included that for the
non-lemon version. If your reading the lemon version I'll finish that scene if
your not and want to see it finished in detail read the lemon version.)
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(Caption)
Ikari Residence

Shinji was sitting in his room listening to the beating of the rain. He was
thinking about all of his friends and how great they were. The new kids were
really cool. He was also so happy that Kensuke had found a kindred spirit in one
of them. Shinji found himself thinking back to the party. Remembering how they
all got to know each other better. It was strange even though he had just meet
them he felt like he had know them before. He didn't feel that about Akane and
Yoko he was sure about that but he definitely felt that about Rei and Kaoru. He
tried to remember where he had known them from. His head started to hurt when he
thought about Rei and Kaoru. He felt that for some reason he must not think of
them. But he forced himself to the pain increased. He closed his eyes and it hit
him flashes images. They were of Rei and Unti-00 instead of being blue it was
orange. Him in Eva Unit-01, Rei shielding him from a blast. Rei sacrificing
herself for him. Rei in Eva Unit-00 throwing !
a lance. Rei being attacked by Eva Unit-03. He saw Unit-02 also being attacked
by Unit-03. Then he got flashes of Asuka. Asuka, Kensuke and Him on a aircraft
carrier. Asuka and Him doing some type of exercises being watched by Kensuke,
Touji and Hikari Him jumping into inside Eva Uni-01 magma to save Asuka who was
in Eva Unit-02 falling into the heart of the volcano. But what were these images
These things had never happened right. Then he saw flashes of Kaoru. Spending
the night at his house. Kaoru telling him he loves him. Then him attacking Kaoru
while he was in Eva Unit-01 with a progressive knife. Him battling Eva Unit-02
with Kaoru near by. Then he saw Kaoru in the hand of Eva Unit-01. Then the hand
squeezed and Kaoru's head popped off. Shinji opened hi eyes and screamed a
bloodcurdling screamed and passed out on the floor. His parents came rushing to
his room.
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Did you like the fic even though I didn't get around to what I promised just
kidding that's no the end obviously there's more I thought about ending it here
but there is still so much That I need to cover in this episode. And you would
all just hate me. I can't have that now can I. To all you Hentais' reading the
lemon version you guys would have really hated me If hadn't finished the Rei and
Kaoru scene. To those of you reading the non-lemon version it ain't and won't be
in here so as I said before go read the lemon version if you want to see what
happens between them like you haven't already guessed it. Now on with the fic
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(Caption)
Ayanami Residence

Kaoru and Rei were now completely naked. Rei was still on all fours above Kaoru.
She turned herself around so that her rear was over Kaoru's face and her mouth
was over Kaoru's mighty oak. Kaoru lifted hi head of Rei's bed and slipped his
tongue into her slit. She was only a little wet but Kaoru intended to change
that. Rei moaned slightly as Kaoru started to go to work. He brought up one of
his hands and started to massage Rei's clit this really got Rei going she moaned
louder, Kaoru could tell he was doing he job right because she got even wetter
then she was before. Kaoru then brought up his other and stuck his finger in
Rei's butthole. She started to moan even louder than before if that was
possible. Then Kaoru felt all of her muscles start to tighten up and Rei had her
first orgasm of the night Kaoru. Took as much of Rei's release as he could the
rest ended up all over his face He loved Rei's taste it was so her and he loved
her this was one of the best gifts she could g!
ive him.. He didn't stop though he kept going and Rei had her first multiple
orgasm.

While Kaoru was doing this Rei had been trying to suck his dick but she was
doing a poor job because he was giving her so much pleasure. She finally go her
act together and started to jerk him with her hand while she was sucking oh his
member. Kaoru was still eating out Rei while she was doing this. She was so
focused on what she was doing that she didn't even feel her impending explosion
till it happened. She screamed as she came just like she had done the first 3
times. She then started to work even harder on Kaoru. Kaoru started to moan
loudly. Rei started to jerk and suck harder and faster then before. Kaoru
stopped what he was doing and cam e into Rei's mouth which she swallowed. She
really loved the taste of him because it was distinctly of him and he willing
shared this part of his soul with her.

Rei stood up and brought her soaking wet pussy over Kaoru's erect member. She
slowly lowered herself down onto it impaling herself on him. She then slowly
started to move up and down. Then her pacing got faster and faster.

Rei: Oh yeah that feels so good.

Rei started to go faster and faster then Kaoru started to play with her breasts
and moving his hips up to meet her they each cam at the same time. Rei got of
Kaoru and snuggled up to him. They both fell asleep in each others arms.
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(Caption)
Tokyo-3 general hospital

Shinji woke up in a start he rose to a siting position. To his surprise he saw
Yoko siting in front of him sleeping. What was Yoko doing sleeping gin a chair
in his room. Shinji looked around his surroundings and realized that it was not
his room and it looked like a hospital. He realized that the anyone that could
answer his question were Yoko.

Shinji softly: Yoko

She stirred a little so he decided to be more direct.

Shinji: Yoko!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yoko jumps out of her chair. She lands on the floor and starts frantically
looking around for the person that called her name. She looks up and sees Shinji
sitting awake in bed.

Shinji: I'm glad you're awake now could you explain to me what's going on.

Yoko smiling: nice to see you to. No hello's or anything like that huh.

Shinji puts his head down and is about to apologize when Yoko stops him.
Yoko: It's ok, it's ok don't worry about it I can see that you're disorientated.
I'll fill you in on what happened.

She proceeded to tell Shinji everything that happened form his parents rushing
him here. His friends coming over to see him when they heard what happened and
Asuka had spent the last day watching over him. She wanted to be here today but
she couldn't afford to miss that much school. So she had asked Yoko to stay and
watch over him since she couldn't. She had come back for awhile today but her
parents had made go home.

Shinji: Asuka can be so heartless sometimes she hides her true self from
everyone and she had shown her true self to Shinji. She now shows it to him all
the time. He loved her he could not believe that she had watched over him for a
day. But then he would do the same for her

Yoko smiling: So how are you feeling Shinji.

Shinji: I feel just fine. the only thing is that I can't remember what made me
scream and made me go unconscious in the first place.

Yoko: That's ok if you want to I can try and help you remember

Shinji thought about tit for a quick second then he felt his head start to ache.

Shinji: No that's ok from what you've told me I don't think I want to remember.

Yoko: So Shinji you up for Eva practice tonight it starts in 20 minutes?

Shinji: That's tonight! Well I'll be there come on let's get out of here.

Yoko leaves the room Shinji gets dresses let's his parents know he's ok and that
he doesn't remember anything. He tells them he's going to Eva practice tonight
then he leaves the hospital with Yoko.
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(Caption)
Nerv Branch 2

Shinji and Yoko arrive only 5 minutes before practice starts. None of their
friends is out in the hall waiting for them so they must already be changing.
The 2 of them show the guards their League cards and they let them pass. Shinji
runs into the guys locker room in the league players area and Yoko runs into the
girls. None of the guys are in there he looks at his watch 3 minutes till
practice starts. He throws on his plug suit and Yoko does the same. the 2 of
them dash through the Nerv complex. They arrive at their designated practice bay
to their surprise. The entire group is sitting their watching a large screen.
Apparently it was live feed from the practice that was already in session. Yoko
and Shinji both noticed the quiet reverie that was going on so they deiced to
watch the screen.

The pilots were amazing. They fought the Angels with ease, they acted like a
true team. they would cover each other back they fought with form and grace.
They looked awesome on the field the Angels fell before them. The 9 teenagers
just stared and wished that they could same day be that good at piloting Eva.
Then the simulation ended. The 9 teenagers exited the simulators.

One boy exited the simulator and was waiting outside it fro the rest of his
team. Asuka decided to comment o their performance.

Asuka: Wow you guys were amazing out there.

Boy: I know we where we are the best Eva team around we are going to go to the
top. No one will stand in our way.

Asuka shots the boy a death glare and is about to say something when another boy
walks out of the simulator area followed by the rest of his team

other boy: Don't mind him he's always like that. My name is Ngumo. This is Aoki,
the person you just met is Corey. this is Megumi, This is Akane, This is Akira,
Sasamy, Sakura and this is Kyoske. I heard what you said about our performance
thanks.

Asuka: Your welcome

Yoko: Yeah you guys were really good out there. Who was piloting Unit-05. That
was Corey he's our leader but pay no head to his attitude he's always like that.

Yoko looks over at Corey and admires how he looks in his plugsuit. she finds
herself staring and admiring his ass.

Aoki: Well we gotta get going. Since you guys are her for practice you must be
in the Eva League. We'll see you tomorrow then. Chow.

The nine teenagers leave the are to get changed and go home. Asuka then realizes
that Yoko was talking and that she would only be her if she brought Shinji
along. Asuka looks over and sees Shinji grinning stupidly at her. She runs over
to him and gives him a big kiss on the lips.

Asuka: Baka what the hell happened to you

Shinji: I'll tell you later right now we've got practice.

The Nerv guys walked over an beckoned them to enter the simulator.

The nine teenagers got into the similar. Shinji was running the simulation
because they had voted him their leader. Shinji broke them down into 3 squads.
Shinji was the groups leader and told them what to do but the squad leaders
commanded the combat specifically. They used this formation for the battle part
of practice. Each of them possessed a drive to do better than the other team
had done. They fought well they had definitely improved on what they had been.
Each of them were handling The Eva's with greater ease then they ever ad before.
The formation also helped great. Shinji and his first squad which consisted of
Kaoru and Yoko fought extremely well they fought like a well-oiled machine. They
all made it out of practice unscathed. Asuka and her second squad, which
consisted of Hikari and Touji, fought well. Not as good as Shinji's group they
lost Hikari and Touji got badly damaged he lost and arm and a hand. Rei's third
squad did the worst of them all. They all survived!
practice but badly damaged. They killed lots of Angels and improved on their
teamwork, which made the battle portion worth while. The weapon training portion
went as expected not much happened. All of them simply got better at using the
different styles of weapons. Soon after the weapons portion the practice ended
and the children went home children went home.
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(Caption)
On route to the Ikari Residence

Asuka and Shinji broke away from the rest of the group right after practice.
They had all wanted to talk to Shinji, but Asuka made it quite clear that Shinji
was hers and that they could talk to him later. Asuka had her arm through
Shinji's and was resting her head on his shoulder as they walked.

Asuka: Shin-Chan you wanna talk about it?

Shinji (surprised that she called him Shin-Chan): About what?

Asuka: You know exactly what I'm talking about.

Shinji: Oh, that thing Asuka-Chan

Asuka (happy to hear him use her new name): Yeah what made you pass out? You had
me so worried I almost had a heart attack.

Shinji: I don't remember and I don't think I want to from what I've heard about
my scream. Whenever I try to remember my head throbs and starts to hurt. I just
want to forget about.

Asuka: Anything you want Shin-Chan.

The 2 of them continue walking on the beautiful moonlight night each of them
grateful for each other.
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(Caption)
Nerv Second Branch control room

Technician: We have gotten extremely good results today specifically from 2
teams in particular. One has made considerable improvements since last time.

Nerv Lt. commander: That's great I have received word that our center and the
Main HQ are producing the most promising results. Some are even producing no
results at all. If things keep going the way that they are currently going then
this project will not be waste of money and everything will be prepared by the
deadline.
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(Caption)
The Next Day
Evangelion League Opening night

Inside of NERV's second branch. 90 teenagers sat in a briefing room surrounded.
the 90 teenagers were seated in-groups of nine. They were all seated according
to their teams. In the center of the room there is a stage. A man dressed in a
commanders uniform walked on to the stage.

Commander: Welcome to the opening night of league play. Tonight I will explain
the different types of league play and what will happen at the end of league
play. So listen up I will explain this once I won't answer any questions because
it is extremely straightforward. Got it

All ninety of the people in the room nod their heads.

Commander: Good. They're are a few different types of league play that we do.
The goal is to get the most points possible in all of the scenarios because the
team with the most points will be going to the U.S. to battle against the best
teams from all of the other branches. The first type is the type we will be
playing today. Every team is playing at once. Each time has 12 minutes to
destroy as many Angels as possible. You receive points for every Angel you
destroy. the second type is Eva versus Eva. Each team is colored differently
Your job is to eradicate the other team. the third type is Eva versus Angels
controlled by humans. This scenario is played 2 each team that is squaring off
against each other pilots the Evas once then the Angels. The fourth and final
type is one on one combat. this is where one Eva battles another. Those are the
current types for now. Some new types may be introduced. In the scenario that
you will be playing today bonus potions are awarded for the !
number of Evas your team has left at the end of a battle. You also receive more
points for the lack of damage done to your Evas. Note the scenario will start in
20 minutes why don't you guys get to know each other. Soon pilot country will be
open and you league players will be allowed in their to frequent it all the
time. Temporary players will be allowed in their but only before and after their
games. Dismissed. And One more thing we will need a name for your Evangelion
team before you exit today.

The commander exited the stage and everyone started to mingle. Kaoru, Rei and
all them net a hole bunch of new people who they couldn't wait to hang out with.
The only unfortunate thing was that the nine of them Ran into Corey and his Eva
team.

Asuka: Oh it's you again we don't have any attention of associating with you
guys. We will be going now.

Asuka turns and is about to walk away form them when Shinji grabs her arm. He
leans over and whispers to Asuka.

Shinji: Asuka-Chan we should stay not all of them are bad people. That kid Ngumo
was very nice and you only don't like Corey you shouldn't pass judgment on all
of them and I think Yoko likes Corey.

They both notice Yoko checking out Corey

Asuka whispers back: Your right Shin-Chan I'll stay, I'll be a bigger person
then that Corey.

She turns around to face the approaching team.

Corey: Oh I thought you were leaving its such a shame now I'll have to endure
your annoying presence's.

Aoki: Corey be nice she only acted that way because of the way you acted towards
them yesterday.

His entire team mumbled the same thing.

Corey: Oh all right I'll be nice to them it doesn't matter we will be the best
Eva team. They just look so pathetic.

He turns and leaves most of his team follow him out except for four of them.
Ngumo, Aoki, Akemi and Megumi remain behind to apologize for Corey.

Akemi: I'm really sorry about Corey he's just like that to everyone.

Megumi: Yeah it's not just you guys so don't take it personally.

Aoki: Yeah don't worry about him.

Ngumo: The only thing he said that reflect all of our views is that we are the
best Eva team.

Megumi: Yep we are definitely the best around

Aoki: You guys are a god team it seems but we are definitely the best

Ngumo: No question about that, well we gotta get going. See Ya

The four of them leave as soon as they leave everyone starts talking about them.

Touji: What a bunch of Assholes did you here what that guy said!

Kaoru: Yeah how much more contemptuous can you get1

Kensuke: I really want to beat them!

Akane: I don't care if we win and go to America as long as we beat them!

Asuka: Yeah! that's our new goal to beat them no matter the cost!

The intercom informs everyone that it's time to go to their pre-designated Eva
bays and to get suited up. Once everyone is in the Evas they are launched. The
Evas appear in Virtual Tokyo-3. each team is in a separate simulator and can't
see the other teams. There is a starting line that they all must wait behind.
Then the Nerv commander comes on the intercom system.

Commander: Evas to your marks, get set, go!

To be continued
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Well I have finally finished that episode. Jeez that took me awhile it's the
longest one yet hoped you like it. I would like to thank all of my prereaders on
this one once again this fic would be awful without you guys thanks a lot. You
guys are great remember read EvaLess, Imagine Normality, The Garden of Eva,
Eva-R, Home and the numerous fics by Shinji The 10oclokc assassin. Everyone
please harass Corey Holmes and Al-I-Bus about finishing their fics never let a
good fic go to waste that's what I say. I know I said there would be a party or
a dance in this well I didn't have time I promise there will be one in the next
one. thanks once again to Kaoru Nagisa for letting me use his characters.
Remember there are only 6 episodes left. check out the next
episode. This fic will star moving rather quickly now instead of days passing by
weeks will start to go by. Remember e-mail me with questions and comments. I'm
outta here
Genesis 1:5
Who's the best/Valentines day dance.

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